This cuts off very abruptly at the end.... You need to use the editing technology better eg you show be cutting away to show the things that you are talking about as really all you have done is pushed a few buttons on cameras and editing software. You could have images of Lady Gaga come up as you talk about her video, layer them so that they are like 'picture in picture'. You could have a clip from your video that shows cutting to the beat as you talk about it, again as picture in picture. You should be showing your website and digipack as you talk about them, highlighting specific features (maybe as a screen cast). You need to clearly define what the conventions of websites and digipacks are. Think back to the ppt I did - it is somewhere on the blog and highlight specific conventions you followed.
This cuts off very abruptly at the end.... You need to use the editing technology better eg you show be cutting away to show the things that you are talking about as really all you have done is pushed a few buttons on cameras and editing software. You could have images of Lady Gaga come up as you talk about her video, layer them so that they are like 'picture in picture'. You could have a clip from your video that shows cutting to the beat as you talk about it, again as picture in picture. You should be showing your website and digipack as you talk about them, highlighting specific features (maybe as a screen cast). You need to clearly define what the conventions of websites and digipacks are. Think back to the ppt I did - it is somewhere on the blog and highlight specific conventions you followed.
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